Writing Handbook

 

Table of Contents


Rubrics

 Writing Rubric

Essay Test Rubric
 

The Writing Process

Revising and Editing Marks

Writing Traits
 

Organization

Introductions - Conclusions

Transitions
 

Word Choice

Descriptive Words

Action Words

Dead Words

Synonyms for said - asked

Thesaurus
 

Sentence Fluency

Sentence Beginnings

The Art of Styling Sentences
 

Conventions
 

Parts of Speech

Noun, Pronoun, Verb

Adjective, Adverb, Preposition

Conjunction, Interjection
 

Punctuation

Apostrophe

Colon, Comma

Dialogue, Hyphen

Quotation Marks, Semicolon

Titles, Underline / Italics
 

Works Cited (MLA)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Writing Rubric              Essay Question Rubric

 

 

 

Writing Rubric (Grades 5-12)

Name ____________________________ Class ________________ Date _____________

                           Rate students from 5 to 1 ( 5 = strong, 1 = needs improvement )

  •   The Paper is Clear, Interesting, and Original
    ___written from writer's experience
    ___written with good insight (sense of world, people, situations)
    ___writing is enlivened, spontaneous, and from a fresh perspective
    ___writing is supported with details, research, and concrete examples
    ___primary and secondary ideas are developed
     
   5  4  3  2  1
  •   Organization Helps to Clearly Convey the Message
    ___
    introductory paragraph, which includes a clear, concise thesis statement
    ___main points developed fully in a sound paragraph
    ___summarizing conclusion, restating the thesis statement
    ___transitions work well (with paragraphs and as a whole)
    ___organization flows smoothly with details correctly placed
     
   5  4  3  2  1
  •   Voice of the Writer Accomplishes the Purpose
    ___
    paper is honest and sincere
    ___writing is natural and compelling
    ___tone is appropriate
    ___writer's interest is evident
     
   5  4  3  2  1
  •   Word Choice is Consistent With the Purpose
    ___words are specific, accurate, and suited to the subject
    ___vocabulary is appropriate for the purpose and audience
    ___figurative language is used when appropriate
     
   5  4  3  2  1
  • Sentence Structure Helps the Paper Read Smoothly
    ___
    sentence structure clearly conveys meaning
    ___writing sounds natural and fluent
    ___sentence fragments and run-on sentences are avoided
    ___varied sentence structure and length
     
   5  4  3  2  1
  • The Writer Displays Skillful Writing Conventions
    ___grammar is correct
    ___punctuation is correct
    ___spelling is correct
    ___usage is correct
    ___paragraphing is appropriate
   5  4  3  2  1
Goes beyond: (extra effort, depth, quality, creativity, cleverness, understanding)


 

Comments:

                                                                                                                               

                                                                                                                            Grade

   

 

 

 

Essay Test Answer Rubric (Grades 5-12)

Name __________________________ Class _________________ Date _____________

             
Rate students from 5 to 1 ( 5 = strong, 1 = needs improvement ).
 


   Response answers the question exactly as it was asked.

   Answer is clear, correct, complete, and not wordy.

   Answer is supported with correct and clear details.

   Answer can be understood in one reading.

   All sentences and word choices are correct and clear.

   All technical or specific terms and/or concepts are used
   and spelled correctly.

   Answer is legible. Correct spelling, punctuation,
   capitalization, and grammar are used.

  

  

    5  4  3  2   1

    5  4  3  2  1

    5  4  3  2  1

    5  4  3  2 1

    5  4  3  2  1

    5  4  3  2  1   

    5  4  3  2  1

 

 


   Goes beyond: (extra effort, depth, quality, creativity, cleverness, understanding)


 

   Comments:


                                                                                                                  Grade

 

 

The Writing Process

I.  Prewriting
   
A. Get your ideas together before you write.
            1. Make a list
            2. Make a web
            3. Ask someone for ideas
            4. Let your ideas flow
            5. Free write
            6. Use a graphic organizer

II. Rough Draft
    
A. Look at the ideas  you came up with in prewriting - see
           if there is any order to them.
      B. Begin writing with the ideas that are most familiar to you.
      C. Keep your writing purpose and audience in mind.

III. Revise...Make it Better
      A. Put your writing through the wash.
      B. Revise for traits
          1, Ideas and content
          2. Organization
          3. Voice
          4. Word choice
          5. Sentence fluency
         
6. Writing conventions
      C. Ask others for input

IV. Edit...Make it Correct
      A. Put your writing through the wash.
     
B. Edit for conventions.
          1. Spelling
          2. Punctuation
          3. Capitalization
          4. Grammar
          5. Usage
          6. Paragraphing
      C. Ask others for input

V. Publish...Make it Beautiful
     A. Use your best handwriting or a computer.
     B. Polish your document for presentation.

 

 

Revising and Editing Marks

 

Common Proofreading Symbols

Symbol Meaning Example
insert a comma
apostrophe or single
quotation mark
insert something
use double quotation marks
use a period here
delete
transpose elements
close up this space
a space needed here
begin new paragraph
no paragraph

Common Proofreading Abbreviations

(The abbreviation would appear in the margin,
probably with a line or arrow pointing to the offending element.)

 

Abbreviation Meaning Example
Ab a faulty abbreviation She had earned a Phd along with her M.D.
Agr
See also P/A and S/V
agreement problem:
subject/verb or
pronoun/antecedent
The piano as well as the guitar need tuning.
The student lost their book.
Awk awkward expression
or construction
The storm had the effect of causing
millions of dollars in damage.
Cap faulty capitalization We spent the Fall in Southern spain.
CS comma splice Raoul tried his best, this time that
wasn't good enough
DICT faulty diction Due to the fact that we were wondering
as to whether it would rain, we stayed home.
Dgl dangling construction Working harder than ever, this job
proved to be too much for him to handle.
- ed problem with
final -ed
Last summer he walk all the way to Birmingham.
Frag fragment Depending on the amount of snow we get this
winter and whether the towns buy new trucks.
| | problem in parallel form My income is bigger than my wife.
P/A pronoun/antecedent
agreement
A student in accounting would be wise to see
their advisor this month.
Pron problem with pronoun My aunt and my mother have wrecked her car
The committee has lost their chance to change things.
You'll have to do this on one's own time.
Rep unnecessary repetition The car was blue in color.
R-O run-on sentence Raoul tried his best this time
that wasn't good enough.
Sp spelling error This sentence is flaude with two mispellings.
- s problem with final -s He wonder what these teacher think of him.
STET Let it stand The proofreader uses this Latin term to indicate that proofreading marks calling for a change should be ignored and the text as originally written should be "let stand."
S/V subject/verb agreement The problem with these cities are leadership.
T verb tense problem He comes into the room, and he pulled his gun.
Wdy wordy Seldom have we perused a document so verbose,
so ostentatious in phrasing, so burdened with too many words.
WW wrong word What affect did the movie have on Sheila?
She tried to hard to analyze its conclusion.

    
 

Writing Traits
 

 

 


Ideas and Content

  • I have a bright idea.

  • It all makes sense.

  • I know this topic well.

  • I have included the most interesting details.

  • My paper has a purpose.

  • Once you start reading, you will not want to stop.
     

 

 


Organization

  • My beginning will interest the reader.

  • Everything ties together.

  • It builds to the good parts.

  • You can follow it easily.

  • At the end, it feels finished and makes you think.

 


 

Voice

  • This really sounds like me!

  • I've been honest and have written what I think and feel.

  • Can you feel my commitment to this topic?

  • I want you to experience my writing with me.

  • I know why I'm writing and who my audience is.

  • I bet you'll want to read this to someone.

 


Word  Choice

  • I use powerful words.

  • This is the best way to say this.

  • My words create mind pictures!

  • I've tried new ways to say everyday things.

  • Listen to the power in my verbs.

  • Some of the words and phrases linger in
    my mind.

 

 


Sentence Fluency

  • My sentences begin in different ways.

  • Some sentences are short and some are long.

  • It just sounds good as I read it aloud--it flows.

  • My sentences have power and punch.

  • I have "sentence sense."

 

 

 


Writing Conventions

  • I don't have many mistakes in my paper.

  • I have used capitals correctly.

  • Periods, commas, exclamation marks, and quotation marks are in the right places.

  • Every word is spelled correctly.

  • I remembered to indent each paragraph.

  • It would not take long to get this ready to share.
     



 

Inviting Introductions

1.  Attention grabber

2.  Movement to thesis statement

3.  Thesis statement

 

 

Satisfying Conclusions

1. Thesis

2.  Summary

3.  Reference to attention grabber

 

 

Transitions

 

Transitions to Clarify

for example                for instance
in other words            put another way
simply stated              stated differently
that is                        to clarify
specifically                 to illustrate the point

 
Transitions to Add Information

additionally           again             along with
also                      further          another
as well                  besides         finally
equally important   for example  for instance
together with         next             moreover
likewise                furthermore  in addition

 

Transitions to Compare

accordingly                also
as                             comparable to
in the same way         in the same manner
in conjunction with     just as
like                           likewise
similarly                    sometimes

 

Transitions to Conclude or Summarize

accordingly                   all in all
as a result                     consequently
due to                          finally
in closing                      in conclusion
in short                         in summary
in the last analysis          last
therefore                       thus
to conclude                   to sum up

 

Transitions to Contrast

although                    as opposed to
but                            conversely
counter to                  even so
even though               however
in spite of this            in the meantime
nevertheless              on the contrary
on the other hand      otherwise
sometimes                still
yet                           even though

 

Transitions to Emphasize a Point

again                            another key point
indeed                          with this in mind
in fact                          for this reason
frequently                    on the positive side
truly                            to point out
to emphasize                surprisingly enough
to repeat                      on the negative side

 

 

Transition Combinations

A good...A better...The best
Initially...Then...After that
To begin...Then...Consequently
A bad...A worse...The worst
It started when...As a result...Then...Therefore
As soon as...Next...Later...In the end
At the beginning...then...Following this...Finally
To begin...At the same time...Finally
One way...Another way...A final method
First of all...Besides...In addition
To start...furthermore...Additionally...Last
One...One other...Along with...Last
In the first place...After that...Later on...At last
First...Along with...Likewise
One important...Another important...The most
First...Second...third
A good example...A better example
An important...an equally important

 

Word  Choice

Descriptive Words     Action Words     Dead Words     Synonyms for said/asked  Thesaurus

 

Descriptive Words

      Touch        Taste        Sight        Smell        Sound        Speed        Color

          Touch  

  cool           cold         icy          thin           tepid         steamy           fragile
  warm         damp       wet          fleshy       sharp         slippery         tender
  tough         mushy     oily          keen         feathery      prickly          crisp
  silky           gritty       satiny      sandy        smooth      rubbery         hairy
  rough         thick        pulpy      dry           dull            lukewarm       fuzzy
 

 
          Taste  

  tangy         gingery     overripe     burnt       hot             ripe               spoiled
  rotten        fruity        fishy          raw         alkaline       medicinal       bland
  spicy         peppery    oily            buttery    salty           bitter             tasteless
  flat            hearty      mellow       sugary     crisp           sour              bittersweet
 

 
          Sight    

  flash          shabby     frail           elegant         scrolled        dull                tampering
  unruffled    twiggy     split           broken         skinny          heavy            square
  thin           shapely    winged       shapeless      rolled           drab              branching
  scalloped   ruffled      frilled        crimmped     crinkled        cylindrical      messy
  wiriy         calm         flared        oval              rigid             comical         wide
  tubular      hollow      rotund       chubby         pleasant        portly           stout
  swollen     lumpy       clustered    padded         tufted           pendulous     muddy
  jutting       irregular    sunny        angular         fresh            wild              frightened
  fiery         blazing      verdant      lush             clean            scrubbed        proportioned
  fragile       pale          pasty         sickly           small            tiny               packed
  tinid         shy           fearful        tearful          nervous        tiered            miniature
  old           worn        tall              lead             slender         exhausted      terrified
  hardy       strong       healthy       robust          sturdy           lively            hysterical
  orderly     straight     curved        loose           crooked         awkward      triangular
  used         tired         ugly           cheap           sloppy          elderly          rectangular
 

 
          Smell    

  sweet      minty        acidy         sickly            scented         fishy            odorous
  acrid       stagnant     moldy       pungent         burnt            sour             fragrant
  musty     gaseous      damp        aromatic        earthy           mildewed     spoiled
  reeking    heady        spicy         savory          putrid            rancid          tempting
  fresh       sharp         rotten        dank             stench           piney           perfumed
 

 
        Sound    

  crash        thud          bump          thump           hiss              thunder        patter
  bang         smash        explode       roar              scream         screech        inaudible
  shout        whistle       whine         squawk         raucous        bawl            mutter
  rage          blare          rumble       slam             deafening      stomp          earsplitting
  stamp       noise         discord       jangle           disorderly      clash            pandemonium
  clamor      tumult        riot            racket           brawl            bedlam        crackle
  hubbub     blatant       clap            bark             snap             boom           twitter
  melody     hum           piercing      rowdy          rasp              yell              rustle
  sigh          murmur      whisper      whit             holler            peaceful       quiet
 

 
          Speed   
                                   Fast                                                  Slow

                  hurry         run           scamper              creep         crawl         plod
                  skip           dart          scramble              slink          lumber      tiptoe
                  scurry        dash         flee                     saunter      loiter         sneak
 

 

          Color

  celery
  mint
  apple
  lime
  olive

 


 

 snowy
 milky
 marble
 cream
 ivory
 oyster
 pearl
 silvery

 

 gold
 mustard
 buff
 straw
 butter
 buttercup
 lemon
 chartreuse
 citron
 canary

 
 sandy
 almond
 amber
 tawny
 cinnamon
 nutmeg
 chocolate
 coffee
 rust
 
 peacock
 periwinkle
 sapphire
 delft
 turquoise
 aqua
 teal
 

 

 rose
 pink
 salmon
 coral
 raspberry
 strawberry
 tomato
 currant
 crimson
 vermillion
 flame
 mulberry
 fuchsia
 violet
 lavender
 orchid
 mauve
 lilac
 plum
 magenta
 pansy
 eggplant
 persimmon
 topaz
 tangerine
 peach
 apricot

 

 

 
 ashy
 dove
 steel
 platinum
 silver
 

 


 

 
 licorice
 jet
 ebony
 coal
 carbon

 

 


 

 

 

 

Action Words

       Verbs          Adverbs          Prepositions

Verbs

  ache
  babble
  bash
  batter
  beam
  beep
  bicker
  blare
  blind
  blink
  blister
  cackle
  chant
  chat
  chuckle
  chug
  clank
  cluck
  cough
 
 crackle
  creep
  croon
  crow
  crunch
  dance
  dazzle
  dribble
  drift
  drip
  engulf
  entertain
  flail
  flap
  flare
  flicker
  flit
  float
  flop
 
  flow
  fume
  glare
  glide
  glisten
  glitter
  glow
  grind
  groan
  gun
  hiss
  hoot
  invite
  jerk
  jump
  kick
  kiss
  laugh
  leap
  light
  loan
  moan
  mock
  mumble
  munch
  nail
  nick
  patter
  peep
  pile
  plop
  pop
  pounce
  pound
  quack
  rattle
  reflect
  roar
  rumble
  sail
  scold
  shriek
  simmer
  sizzle
  slap
  slosh
  smash
  smoke
  soar
  spark
  spin
  splash
  sprinkle
  sputter
  squash
  streak
  thump
  thunder
  trill
  twinkle
  wail
  wheeze
  whip
  whir
  whisk
  whistle
  wink
  yap
  yell
  zap
  zip
  zoom

 

 

Adverbs
Adverbs answer the questions: How?  When?  Where?  To what extent?


                    Adverbs ending in - ly                                    Adverbs not ending in - ly

  actually
  appallingly
  barely
  carefully
  certainly
  easily
  extremely
  finally
  friendly
  fully
  generally
  gradually
  highly
  horribly
  hurriedly
  intricately
  nearly
  painstakingly
  probably
  quickly
  quietly
  rapidly
  slowly
  smoothly
  sorrowfully
  strangely
  suddenly
  surprisingly
  totally
  already
  away
  far
  fast
  here
  inside
  just
  more
  most
  nearby
  not
  now
  often
  out
  over
  quite
  rather
  so
  sometimes
  soon
  then
  there
  today
  together
  tomorrow
  too
  very
  well
  yesterday

 

Prepositions

  aboard
  about
  above
  across
  after
  against
  along
  among
  around
  at
  before
  behind
  below
  beneath
  beside
  between
  beyond
  by
  concerning
  down
  during
  except
  for
  from
  in
  inside
  into
  like
  near
  of
  off
  on
  onto
  out
  outside
  over
  past
  since
  through
  throughout
 
  to
  toward
  under
  underneath
  until
  up
  upon
  with
  within
  without
 

 

 

Don't use these Dead Words    

  a lot
  bad
  cool
  fine
  fine
  get
  got
  good
  like
  lots
  many
  nice
  really
  so
  stuff
  thing
  very
  well
  you
  yours
 

Use these words instead of very (one of the dead words).

 
  bitterly
  chiefly
  especially
  exceedingly
  imeasurable
  infinitely
  intensely
  mightily
  powerfully
  richly
  shockingly
  severely
  surely
  truly
  unusually

Use these words instead of get (one of the dead words).

  accomplished
  achieve
  acquire
  act
  annoy
  approach
  arrive
  ask
  assassinate
  attain
  bag
  be
  become
  begat
  borrow
  bribe
  bring
  build
  buy
  capture
  catch
  collect
  come
  comprehend
  conceive
  contract
  convince
  cook
  do
  drive
  dunk
  earn
  eat
  escape
  establish
  fetch
  find
  fix
  follow
  gain
  generate
  give
  go
  grab
  grasp
  hand
  help
  hire
  hit
  hook
  induce
  influence
  inform
  inherit
  kill
  learn
  live
  locate
  make
  manage
  master
  murder
  obtain
  overcome
  perceive
  persuade
  prepare
  procure
  produce
  profit
  purchase
  pursue
  put
  puzzle
  salvage
  score
  secure
  see
  seize
  serve
  shoot
  slip
  snare
  snatch
  steal
  strike
  succeed
  support
  survive
  raise
  reach
  reap
  receive
  regain
  remember
  remove
  rent
  retrieve
  ring
  run
  take
  thrill
  trap
  understand

 

Synonyms for said and asked

  accused
  acknowledged
  added
  admitted
  advised
  agreed
  announced
  answered
  apologized
  argued
  asked
  babbled
  badgered
  barked
  began
  begged
  bickered
  boasted
  bragged
  called
  cautioned
  challenged
  chattered
  cheered
  chuckled
  claimed
  coaxed
  commented
  complained
  complimented
  complained
  complimented
  concluded
  confessed
  confided
  continued
  cried
  decided
  declared
  demanded
  denied
  described
  directed
  disagreed
  elaborated
  emphasized
  exclaimed
  explained
  exploded
  feared
  fibbed
  filled in
  finished
  fired
  fretted
  fumed
  fussed
  gasped
  giggled
  gloated
  grinned
  grunted
  held
  hinted
  hissed
  howled
  implied
  inquired
  insisted
  interrupted
  joked
  kidded
  laughed
  lectured
  lied
  mentioned
  meowed
  mewed
  mimicked
  moaned
  mocked
  mumbled
  murmured
  muttered
  nagged
  objected
  observed
  ordered
  panted
  persisted
  persuaded
  pleaded
  pointed out
  pouted
  praised
  predicted
  pretended
  proclaimed
  prodded
  promised
  prompted
  purposed
  quarreled
  questioned
  quibbled
  quizzed
  ranted
  reassured
  recalled
  remarked
  remembered
  reminded
  repeated
  replied
  reported
  requested
  responded
  revealed
  roared
  ruled
  sassed
  scolded
  screamed
  screeched
  shouted
  shrieked
  sighed
  snapped
  sneered
 sobbed
  specified
  sputtered
  squawked
  squeaked
  squealed
  stammered
  stated
  sstormed
  stressed
  stuttered
  suggested
 taunted
  thought
  threatened
  tweeted
  urged
  uttered
  vowed
  wailed
  warned
  yawned
  yelled


 
Synonyms  for
  Asked

  demanded
  interrogated
  inquired
  investigated
  invited
  guessed
  probed
  questioned
  quizzed
  requested

 

 

 

Thesaurus

A  B  C  D  E  F  G  H I J K  L  M  N O  P Q R  S  T  U  V  W  X  Y  Z

A

Amazing - incredible, unbelievable, improbably, fabulous, wonderful, fantastic, astonishing, astounding, extraordinary

Anger - enrage, infuriate, arouse, nettle, exasperate, inflame, madden

Angry - mad, furious, enraged, excited, wrathful, indignant, exasperated, aroused, inflamed

Answer - reply, respond, retort, acknowledge

Ask - question, inquire of, seek information from, put a question to, demand, request, expect, inquire, query,
         interrogate, examine, quiz

Awful - dreadful, terrible, abominable, bad, poor, unpleasant

 

B

Bad - evil, immoral, wicked, corrupt, sinful, depraved, rotten, contaminated, spoiled, tainted, harmful,
         injurious, unfavorable, defective, inferior, imperfect, substandard, faulty, improper, inappropriate,
         unsuitable, disagreeable, unpleasant, cross, nasty, unfriendly, irascible, horrible, atrocious, outrageous,
         scandalous, infamous, wrong, noxious, sinister, putrid, snide, deplorable, dismal, gross, heinous,
         nefarious, base, obnoxious, detestable, despicable, contemptible, foul, rank, ghastly, execrable

Beautiful - pretty, lovely, handsome, attractive, gorgeous, dazzling, splendid, magnificent, comely, fair,
                ravishing, graceful, elegant, fine, exquisite, aesthetic, pleasing, shapely, delicate, stunning,
                glorious, heavenly, resplendent, radiant, glowing, blooming, sparkling

Begin - start, open, launch, initiate,  commence, inaugurate, originate

big - enormous, huge, immense, gigantic, vast, colossal, gargantuan, large, sizeable, grand, great,
        tall, substantial, mammoth, astronomical, ample, broad, expansive, spacious, stout, tremendous,
        titanic, mountainous

brave - courageous, fearless, dauntless, intrepid, plucky, daring, heroic, valorous, audacious, bold,
           gallant, valiant, doughty, mettlesome

break - fracture, rupture, shatter, smash, wreck, crash, demolish

bright - shining, shiny, gleaming, brilliant, sparkling, shimmering, radiant, vivid, colorful, lustrous,
            luminous, incandescent, intelligent, brilliant, knowing, quick-witted, smart, intellectual

 

C

calm - quiet, peaceful, still, tranquil, mild, serene, smooth, composed, collected, ruffled, level-headed,
          unexcited, detached, aloof

come - approach, advance, arrive, reach

cool - chilly, cold, frosty, wintry, icy, frigid

crooked - bent, twisted, curved, hooked, zigzag

cry - shout, yell, yowl, scream, roar, bellow, weep, wail, sob, bawl

cut - gash, slash, nick, sever, slice, carve, cleave, slit, chop, crop, lop, reduce

 

D

dangerous - perilous, hazardous, risky, uncertain, unsafe

dark - shadowy, unlit, murky, gloomy, dim, dusky, shaded, sunless, black, dismal, sad

decide - determine, settle, choose, resolve

definite - certain, sure, positive, determined, clear, distinct, obvious

delicious - savory, delectable, appetizing, luscious, scrumptious, palatable, delightful, enjoyable,
                toothsome, exquisite

describe - portray, characterize, picture, narrate, relate, recount, represent, report

destroy - ruin, demolish, raze, waste, kill, slay, end, extinguish

difference - disagreement, inequality, contrast, dissimilarity, incompatibility

do - execute, enact, carry out, finish, conclude, effect, accomplish, achieve, attain

dull - boring, tiring, tiresome, uninteresting, slow, dumb, stupid, unimaginative, lifeless, dead,
         insensible, tedious, wearisome, listless, expressionless, plain, monotonous, humdrum, dreary

 

 

E

eager - keen fervent, enthusiastic, involved, interested, alive to

end - stop, finish, terminate, conclude, close, halt, cessation, discontinuance

enjoy - appreciate, delight in, to be pleased with, indulge in, luxuriate in, bask in, relish,
            savor, like

explain - elaborate, clarify, define, interpret, justify, account for

 

F

fair - just, impartial, unbiased, objective, unprejudiced, honest

fall - drop, descend, plunge, topple, tumble

false - fake, fraudulent, counterfeit, spurious, untrue, unfounded, erroneous, deceptive,
          groundless, fallacious

famous - well-known, renowned, celebrated, famed, eminent, illustrious, distinguished,
              noted, notorious

fast - quick, rapid, swift, speedy, fleet, hasty, snappy, mercurial, swiftly, rapidly, quickly, snappily,
        speedily, posthaste, hastily, expeditiously, like a flash

fear - fright, dread, terror, alarm, dismay, anxiety, awe, horror, panic, apprehension

fly - soar, hover, flit, wing, flee, waft, glide, coast, skim, sail, cruise

funny - humorous, amusing, droll, comic, comical, laughable, silly

 

G

get - acquire, obtain, secure, procure, gain, fetch, find, accumulate, win, earn, reap, catch, net,
        bag, derive, collect, gather, glean, pick up, accept, come by, regain, salvage

go - recede, depart, fade, disappear, move, travel, proceed

good - excellent, fine, superior, wonderful, marvelous, suited, suitable, proper, capable, generous,
          kindly, friendly, gracious, obliging, pleasant, agreeable, pleasurable, satisfactory, well-behaved,
          obedient, honorable, reliable, trustworthy, favorable, profitable, advantageous, righteous,
          expedient, helpful, valid, genuine, ample, salubrious, estimable, beneficial, splendid, great,
          noble, worthy, first-rate, top-notch, grand, superb, respectable

great - noteworthy, worthy, distinguished, remarkable, grand, considerable, powerful, much, mighty

gross - improper, rude, coarse, indecent, crude, vulgar, outrageous, extreme, grievous, shameful,
          uncouth, obscene, low

 

H

happy - pleased, contented, satisfied, delighted, elated, joyful, cheerful, ecstatic, jubilant, gay,
            tickled, gratified, glad, blissful, overjoyed

hate - despise, loath, detest, abhor, disfavor, dislike, disapprove, abominate

have - hold, possess, own, contain, acquire, gain, maintain, bear, beget, occupy, absorb, fill

help - aid, assist, support, encourage, back, wait on, attend, serve, relieve, succor, benefit,
         befriend, abet

hide - conceal, cover, mask, cloak, camouflage, screen, shroud, veil

hurry - rush, run, speed, race, hasten, accelerate, bustle

hurt - damage, harm, injure, wound, afflict, pain

 

I

idea - thought, concept, conception, notion, understanding, opinion, plan, view, belief

important - necessary, vital, critical, indispensable, valuable, essential, significant, primary, principal,
                 considerable, famous, distinguished, notable, well-known

interesting - fascinating, engaging, sharp, keen, bright, intelligent, animated, spirited, attractive,
                  inviting, intriguing, provocative, thought-provoking, challenging, inspiring, involving,
                  moving, titillating, tantalizing, exciting, entertaining, piquant, lively, racy, spicy,
                  engrossing, absorbing, consuming, griping, arresting, enthralling, spellbinding,
                  curious, captivating, enchanting, bewitching, appealing

 

J

job - work, chore, task, duty, employment, business, position, place, post

join - connect, combine, unite, associate, consolidate, couple, merge, weld

joke - jest, quip, witticism

joker - clown, comedian, jester, wit

jump - leap, spring, bound, hop, somersault, hop, vault, rise, parachute,

 

K

keep - hold, retain, withhold, preserve, maintain, sustain, support

kill - slay, execute, assassinate, murder, destroy, abolish

kind - (noun) type, sort,  variety, class, species, breed, nature, character
          (adjective) kindly loving, gentle, tender, compassionate, humane, charitable, sympathetic

knock -  rap, hit, bat, clap, bump, beat, slap, cuff, strike, bash, punch, criticize

know - understand, comprehend, recognize, see, perceive, distinguish, realize, experience

 

L

lazy - indolent, slothful, idle, inactive, sluggish

little - tiny, small, diminutive, shrimp, runt, miniature, puny, exiguous, dinky, cramped, limited,
         microscopic, slight, petite, minute

look - gaze, see, glance, watch, survey, study, seek, search for, peek, peep, glimpse, stare,
         contemplate, examine, gape, ogle, scrutinize, inspect, leer, behold, observe, view, witness,
         perceive, spy, sight, discover, notice, recognize, peer, eye, gawk, peruse, explore

love - like, admire, esteem, fancy, care for, cherish, adore, treasure, worship, appreciate, savor

 

M

make - create, originate, invent, beget, form, construct, design, fabricate, manufacture, produce,
           build, develop, do, effect, execute, compose, perform, accomplish, earn, gain, obtain,
           acquire, get

mark - label, tag, price, ticket, impress, trace, imprint, stamp, brand, sign, note, heed,
          notice, designate

mischievous - prankish, playful, naughty, roguish, waggish, impish, sportive

moody - temperamental, changeable, short-tempered, glum, morose, sullen, irritable,
             testy, peevish, fretful, spiteful, sulky, touchy

move - plod, go, creep, crawl, inch, poke, drag, toddle, shuffle, trot, dawdle, walk, traipse,
           mosey, jog, plug, trudge, lumber, lag, run, sprint, trip, bound, hotfoot, high-tail,
           streak, stride, tear, breeze, whisk, rush, dash, dart, bolt, scamper, scurry, skedaddle,
           scoot, scuttle, scramble, race, chase, hasten, hurry, gallop, lope, accelerate, stir,
           budget, travel, wander, roam, journey, trek, ride, slip, glide, slide, slither, coast, sail,
           saunter, hobble, amble, stagger, prance, straggle, meander, perambulate, waddle,
           wobble, promenade, lunge

 

N

neat - clean, orderly, tidy, trim, dapper, natty, smart, elegant, organized, spruce,
         shipshape, well-kept

new - fresh, unique, original, unusual, modern, current, recent

now - presently, immediately, recently, sometimes

 

O

obey - comply, yield, submit, serve, follow, observe

obtain - secure, acquire, gain, achieve, capture

obviously - apparently, definitely, evidently, visibly

odd - strange, peculiar, unusual, uncommon, curious, quaint, extraordinary, funny, outlandish,
        erratic, eccentric, grotesque

odor - scent, fragrance, bouquet, perfume, smell, aroma, stink, stench, reek

old - feeble, frail, ancient, aged, used, worn, dilapidated, ragged, faded, broken-down, former,
       old-fashioned, outmoded, passe´, veteran, mature, venerable, primitive, traditional, archaic,
      conventional, customary, stale, musty, obsolete

 

P

part - portion, share, piece, allotment, section, fraction, fragment

place - space, area, spot, region, location, position, residence, dwelling, set, site, station, status, state

plan - plot, scheme, design, draw, map, diagram, procedure, arrangement, intention, contrivance,
         method, way, blueprint

popular - well-liked, approved, accepted, favorite, celebrated, common, current

problem - quandary, dilemma, pickle, problem, plight, scrape, jam, predicament

put - place, set, attach, establish, assign, keep, save, set aside, effect, achieve, do, build

 

Q

quickly - promptly, readily, soon, swiftly

quiet - silent, still, soundless, mute, tranquil, peaceful, calm, restful

quite - considerably, rather, truly, entirely, completely

 

R

right - correct, accurate, factual, true, good, just, honest, upright, lawful, moral, proper, suitable, apt, legal, fair

run - race, speed, hurry, hasten, sprint, dash, rush, escape, elope, flee

 

S

say/tell - inform, notify, advise, relate, recount, narrate, explain, reveal, disclose, divulge, declare,
             command, order bid, enlighten, instruct, insist, teach, train, direct, issue, remark, converse,
             speak, affirm, utter, express, verbalize, voice, articulate, pronounce, deliver, convey, impart,
             assert, state, allege, mutter, mumble, whisper, sigh, exclaim, yell, sing, help, snarl, hiss, grunt,
             snort, roar, bellow, thunder, boom, scream, shriek, screech, squawk, whine, philosophize,
             stammer, stutter, lisp, drawl, jabber, announce, swear, vow

scared - afraid, frightened, alarmed, terrified, panicked, fearful, unnerved, insecure, timid, shy,
            skittish, jumpy, disquieted, worried, vexed, troubled, disturbed, horrified, terrorized,
            shocked, petrified, timorous, shrinking, tremulous, stupefied, paralyzed, stunned,
            apprehensive

show - display, exhibit, present, note, point to, indicate, explain, reveal, prove, demonstrate, expose

slow - unhurried, gradual, leisurely, late, behind, tedious, stack

stop - cease, halt, pause, discontinue, conclude, end, finish, quit

story - tale, myth, legend, fable, yarn, account, narrative, chronicle, epic, anecdote, memoir

strange - odd, peculiar, unusual, unfamiliar, uncommon, queer, weird, outlandish, curious,
             unique, exclusive, irregular

 

T

take - hold, catch, seize, grasp, win, capture, acquire, pick, choose, select, remove, steal, lift,
         rob, engage, purchase, buy, retract, recall, occupy, consume

tell - disclose, reveal, show, expose, uncover, relate, narrate, inform, advise, explain, divulge,
       declare, command, order, bid, recount, repeat

think - judge, deem, assure, believe, consider, contemplate, reflect, meditate

trouble - distress, anguish, anxiety, worry, wretchedness, pain, danger, peril, disaster, grief,
             misfortune, difficulty, concern, inconvenience, effort

true - accurate, right, proper, precise, exact, valid, genuine, real, actual, steady, loyal,
         dependable, sincere

 

U

ugly - hideous, frightful, frightening, shocking, horrible, unpleasant, monstrous, repulsive,
         terrifying, gross, gruesome, grisly, ghastly, horrid, unsightly, plain, homely, unattractive

unhappy - miserable, uncomfortable, wretched, heartbroken, unfortunate, downhearted,
               sorrowful, depressed, dejected, melancholy, glum, gloomy, dismal, discouraged, sad

use - employ, utilize, exhaust, spend, expend, consume, exercise

 

V

valuable - expensive, costly, precious, high-priced, significant

vanish - disappear, dissolve, evaporate, fade, sink, perish

very - greatly, extremely, hugely, exceedingly, exactly, absolutely

 

W

want - desire, wish, crave, need, require, hanker, fancy

warn - caution, alert, advise, apprise, signal, inform

weird - curious, magical, mysterious, odd

wrong - incorrect, inaccurate mistaken, erroneous, improper, unsuitable

 

X Y Z

yell - cheer, shout, cry, holler, scream, screech

yet - now, besides, further, hitherto, nevertheless, finally, eventually, still

young - youthful, early, newborn, vigorous, fresh, junior, juvenile, adolescent, green, immature, inexperienced,

 

 

Sentence  Fluency

 

Sentence Beginnings               The Art of Styling Sentences

 

 

 

   Sentence  Beginnings

1.   Two adjectives:                 Intelligent, hard-working students study every night.

2.   An appositive:                  Margaret, intelligent and hard working, studies at the library.

3.   A parallel structure:          Intelligent and hard working, Margaret studies at the library.

4.   A question:                        Who could that intelligent, hard-working student be?

5.   A prepositional phrase:     In the brightly-lit classroom, the intelligent, hard-working
                                              students study for an entire class period.

6.   An infinitive:                     To study all day in the information-filled classroom is the duty
                                              of the students.

7.   A gerund:                          Listening and studying all day in the classroom is the students' duty.

8.   A perfect participle:          Having sat all day in the classroom, the students were anxious for
       (past participle)             
soda and chips.

9.   A present participle:         Smiling at the busy students, the teacher keeps watch.

10. A predicate adjective:       The teacher is pleasant.

11. A predicate noun:             The well-trained teacher was the obvious leader.

12. An adverbial clause:          Until we learned the parts of speech, we couldn't improve our writing.

13. An adjective clause:          Andy, who has the mind of a scientist, worked as lab assistant.

14. A noun clause:                  That he could study all day in the library has never been proven.

15. An exclamation (!):            Wow!  He certainly is enjoying middle school.

 

 

 

The Art of Styling Sentences

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Parts  of  Speech  

Noun    Pronoun    Verb    Adjective    Adverb    Preposition    Conjunction    Interjection

Noun
A noun is a word which names a person, place, thing, or idea.

                        person:  Maria, friend, Josh, parent
                        place:  home, Miami, city, backyard
                        thing: baseball, homework, secret
                        idea:  happiness, trouble, friendship

                    Common Nouns                    Proper Nouns 
                        woman                                  Betsy Ross
                        fort                                       Fort Sisseton
                        mountains                             the Rocky Mountains
                        team                                      the Minnesota Twins
                        park                                      Bramble Park


Pronoun
A pronoun is a word used in place of a noun.


Verb
A verb shows action or links the subject to another word in the sentence.

                   The boys hike along the river.

                   My new car looks shiny.

                   Lee will write in his journal.


Adjective
Adjectives are words that describe nouns or pronouns.  Adjectives tell what kind,
how many, or which one.


Adverb
Adverbs are words that describe verbs, adjectives, or other adverbs.  Adverbs tell
how, when, where, how often, and how much.  Adverbs often end in ly.

Preposition
Prepositions are words that show position or direction and introduce prepositional
phrases.

 

Conjunction
A conjunction connects individual words or groups of words.



Interjection
An interjection is a word or phrase used to express strong emotion or surprise.  A
comma or an exclamation point is used to separate an interjection from the rest
of the sentence.

 

 

Punctuation

Apostrophe    Colon    Comma    Dialogue    Hyphen    Quotation Marks    Semicolon    Titles    Underline/Italics

 

Apostrophe
An apostrophe is used to show a letter or letters have been left out of a word, to form
plurals, or to show possession.

                    don't = do not (o is left out)
                    she'd = she would (would is left out)
                    it's = it is (i is left out)

                    A's,     8's,     +'s,     to's

                    The world's population will double by the year 2050.
                    Did Mr. Berg's lecture explain endangered species?

Note:  When a singular noun ends with an s or z sound. the possessive may be
             formed by adding just an apostrophe.  When the singular noun is a one-syllable word,
             however, the possessive is usually formed by adding
's.

                        
Texas' resources (or) Texas's resources
                         boss's request (one-syllable noun ending in s)

                        Joneses' great-grandfather
                        children's book

Remember:   The word immediately before the apostrophe is the owner.

                            the kid's custom-designed sneakers          (kid is the owner)
                            the girls' wide-leg riding pants                  (girls are the owners)
                            boss's office                                              (boss is the owner)
                            bosses' office                                            (bosses are the owners)

                    Smith, Nelson, Garcia's air band (All three are members of the band.)
                    Smith's, Nelson's, and Garcia's guitars (Each person owns a guitar.)

                    her sister-in-law's pop music (singular)
                    the secretary of state's wife (singular)
                    their sisters-in-law's tastes in music (plural)
                    the secretaries of state's wives (plural)

 

Colon
A colon may be used in a salutation, to introduce a list, or between the numbers in time.

 

Comma
A comma is used to indicate a pause or change in thought.

Dialogue
Periods and commas are placed inside quotation marks in dialogue.

 

Hyphen
The hyphen is used to create new words, to join words, to divide a word, and
to join letters and words.

 

Quotation Marks
Quotation marks are placed before and after direct quotes

Single quotation marks are used to punctuate a quote within a quote.

 

Semicolon
Use a semicolon between the clauses of a compound sentence that are not joined by a conjunction.

Use a semicolon between clauses in a compound sentence that are joined by certain transitional words.

 

Titles
Italicize or underline the titles of books, plays, book-length poems, magazines, radio and television programs, movies (videos), cassettes and CD's, pamphlets, manuals, the names of aircraft and ships, and newspapers.

Use quotation marks for short pieces of written work, song titles, articles from magazines and newspapers,
chapters, short stories, one-act plays, class names, and short poems.

 

Underline / Italics
Underline or italicize foreign words that are not commonly used.  Also, underline or
italicize scientific names.

 

Works  Cited  (MLA)

 

Key points to remember when doing a works cited page:



For a book with one author:

    Robinson, Adam.  What Smart Students Know.  New York:  Crown Paperbacks, 1993.



For a book with two authors:

    Sorensen, Sharon, and Bob LeBreck.  The Research Paper.  New York:  Amsco
               Publications, 1994.



For a book with no author:

    The World of Learning.  London:  Europa Publications, 1995.



A signed article in an encyclopedia:

    Rupp, Ernest Gordon.  "Erasmus." Encyclopedia Britannica:  Macropedia.  1991 ed.



An unsigned article in an encyclopedia:

    "Mandarin." Encyclopedia Americana.  1991 ed.



An article in a magazine:

    Begley, Sharon.  "A Healthy Dose of Laughter." Newsweek 4 Oct. 1982: 74.



An article from an Internet site:

    Bradshaw, Gary S. "Wilbur and Orville Wright." Oct. 1996
                URL: http://www.wam.umd.edu/~srwright/WrBrWrights.htm.